Major Issues Of Twig Project

After interim critique it was obvious that there was a lot of issues that the class needs to work on. One clear and obvious issue that a plethora of projects had trouble with was the fact that the creator had to do so much explaining to convey their idea. I need to focus more on letting the project speak for itself. Another issue with the projects was scale. There needs to be a better contrast between the twigs scale and the projects. A sense of relativity needs to be achieved. Also, color could be improved on the projects. A more definite contrast needs to be made between the twigs and paper so that the color enhances rather than defines the project. Visualization and focus were also key issues. More strategic thinking and variety reduction needs to occur. And finally, craft needs to be considered more. All of the projects could use more craftsmanship to make the project more impressive.